Wednesday, 2 March 2016

Pop corn extreme💥💥💥💥💥💥

Popcorn  extreme⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️⚠️
I smelt a buttery scent entering my nose - it smelt so nice. I saw popcorn  bursting out of the  popcorn machine like lava erupting from a volcano. Kids  tried to catch the yummy popcorn. I heard  popping  from the popcorn machine and crunching from kids who were eating popcorn.   Hearing kids eat was so tempting. I got my popcorn and it tasted so crunchy and yummy - it was like popcorn heaven. As soon as I  bit my first piece of popcorn it was like I won a million dollars.
            



















 
 


1 comment:

  1. I was able to use all my senses while reading the script. Very nice description and metaphor �� It is indeed an extreme description.

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